Dear All,
Here it goes the much awaited for sequel to the poem of our times.
Let’s be one …
You are finance, I am marketing
Your are mind, I am heart
We are different
But can we be one?
My hair will leave me soon
But you don’t leave me ever
‘Coz leave u will, and I’ll be lonely
Please be mine
We will dance the entire evening
We will eat together
You and me, we look good
Only you and me
The eyes still yearn, the heart still burns
And I still crave
But still it’s so difficult
Please be mine
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this one is nothing in comparison to last one.....its not evn rhyming... shoddy work
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ReplyDeleteWe could've waited for the next sequel, but please don't compromise with the quality of the writing being put down here.
This looks like the work of a person being forced to write on gun-point; definitely not a "Sound of IMI" ! :D
P.S.: I urge the moderators to disallow anonymous comments.We all deserve to know who's comments are being put up here !
yeah...but some people have liked it...will try to come up with an improved version after the exams...thanks for the comments though
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